Shortly after Jack is possesed he goes insane attacking wendy with a roque mallet breaks 3 of her ribs her vertebre and one of her knee caps, she get s away by stabing jack in his back with a butcher knife as he chaces her in to the suite.
he hears a snowcat of Dick holloran the head chef he hids behind a pillar and attacks him shatering his and giving him a concusion. He hears Danny scream and he goes after him he follows him but gets away reminding him that the boiler is about burst destroying the Hotel. Wendy Dick and Danny regroup and leave in the snow cat and jack is half way to the boiler when it explodes killing him and the Hotel.
Most Horror stories use last second climaxs to get the readers excited shoing the final ending with clarity to an end of a great story.
Rich
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lol i thought my book is crazy,when i read your blog now thats a crazy book
That sounds crazy, wish i would have read it.
Rich, you've abandoned formatting and the questions. I like the spark of a thought you add at the end, but that is what you should be building your response from, not ending it with.
Anyway, don't have your assessment, so this is your graded response.
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